Letter to the editor of a magazine

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to express my concern about an advert which appeared in your magazine the last week.

I have to say that at the beginning the product persuaded me about it efficiency, because it offers a natural product, and the brad asserts that the product is highly effective in 97% of the cases.

Therefore I decided to order that forcibly product, the problems started from the very beginning, at the moment I ordered the product, the company assert me that they will envy the special introductory pack, but when I received the package it was incomplete, evidently I got disappointed and I call the company at the same phone number they provided in the advertisement in your magazine, and surprisingly they didn’t answer my call.

Furthermore I started to use the shampoo, and that I got was all the adverse, in my hair started to appear white scales, I went to the doctor and his diagnostic was that the shampoo caused me dandruff.

Until nowadays I’ve failed trying to communicate with the company, for the reasons I’ve express before I suggest you to check better what you publish in your famous magazine taking into account that this kind of situations could harm your magazine’s credibility.

I really hope you read this letter which only pretends to make you a critical suggestion, to respect your readers.

Iridian Campos